The challenge: Improve this sentence by using sensory imagery. Make it interesting! Do not begin the sentence with: this, the, that, these, it, I or my. (Try using exciting question words.)
1- The yellow lemon was on the table.
a- Patiently, the sweet fruit was waiting on the magnificent wooden table. Richly textured was this ingredient, it was golden yellow and as juicy as an apple.
2- The grass is growing.
b- Millions of tiny green blades are sprouting on the fertile and moist soil.
3- The dog was walking.
c- Happily, Munchkin, the 3 legged chihuahua, scurried along the busy sidewalk with Blobabchikin, his master.
4- The man is surprised.
d- Colonel Blobabchikin's heartbeat raced, crimson colours exploded on his cheeks, his jaw dropped wide open, and his bright blue eyes bulged when he saw his enormous birthday cake.
5- He likes to play video games.
e-Overjoyed, the bold boy was unable to contain his laughter. He felt so excited has he typed the password for his new Tower Defence Ultra video game on his 4DS XL.
