Tuesday, April 16, 2013

CopyCat Story

Hello Everyone! Today I'm going to show you a copycat story I wrote last month. It's called...

The Climb







Our main character’s name is Peakbow. He lives on a remote island called Henoui. Peakbow is part of a rare species of apes, he also lives with other rare species such as the blue striped lion and the titan tree.


Mornings were always beautiful in the Kenza Jungle. Our young friend was just waking up from a good night of sleep. From his bedroom window, he saw the mysterious and dense forest as well as the gigantic holyu flowers. Yawning, Peakbow heard the chirping birds and the singing frogs that were diving into the magnificent crystal lake. Stepping onto the porch, he smelled the delicious typhoon bananas along with the humid titan trees. That day the jungle was just as perfect as it always was.  




Peakbow thought, “I wish I could visit my cousin at the far east of this island”

Peakbow couldn’t do that, because the far east was surrounded with water. However, there is a way to reach the far east. If Peakbow knew how to climb he could escalate the trees overlapping the water and get to his cousin Ringbushin’s house.


Without hesitation Peakbow sign up for the CLC (Climbing Learning Center) next to the Crystal Lake.




Peakbow was just walking to the learning center when suddenly he met the wise and imposing Steelflake, Elite Climber and main teacher of the center. Peakbow felt nervous, because he thought Steelflake would laugh at him, because he couldn’t climb.;

“Hey how is it going? asked Steelflake.
“Um...um...go...good,” stuttered Peakbow
“I would like to ask you a question Peakbow.” said Steelflake while looking at Peakbow’s nameplate.
“Y...Yes?”
“Well, I want you to join my classes.”
“Yes!?” exclaimed Peakbow overjoyed”
Smiling kindly, Steelflake looked at Peakbow and chuckled “The classes start after the midday meal.”



All of Peakbow’s first classes were easy and simple. He obtained the Titan Rank and he was very chipper about that. Until this day, he had never climbed a tree. Peakbow was obviously nervous and anxious.

“Well, here goes nothing,” said Peakbow. The first branches were tricky and hard to climb.

“Ummm.... this is quite difficult”, thought Peakbow. CRACK, “AHHH!” shouted Peakbow falling from the training tree.

Bruised, Peakbow was sent to the warmth of his comfortable bed.  
1 week later, Peakbow recovered slowly but efficiently.



When Peakbow learned of his fall he felt ashamed, because when it happened all his classmates laughed and giggled at him. Enraged, he decide to plan a revenge “But wait,” he thought: “why don't I impress them instead of trying to get a revenge?” Satisfied, Peakbow planned what he would do to impress them.


After a day or two, he finally knew what he could do. Excitedly he decided he would escalate Enokew the tallest tree in the village. One red pair of spiked boots, two long ropes, a light ice axe and some freshly baked cookies were packed and ready to go. Nervously, he planned to start climbing at midday.

“Wow this is easy”, he thought, “well, at least at this time of the day there aren’t any poison leopards in the trees. When he finally reached the top, Peakbow was amazed that he had climbed 1 mile of bark!

“Ummm”, said Peakbow to himself “how do I get down now?” The young student was trapped unaware of the danger that lurked in the sky. That “danger” was called a swift eagle: fast, enormous, vicious and strong. They were the ultimate aerial predator. Diving into the clouds to remain unseen and keep great stealth, the eagle swooped in to snatch Peakbow, Suddenly, a scout monkey grabbed Peakbow and saved him from the fierce eagle.
Climbing down the scouts keen eye spotted the eagle far away and Peakbow nestled in his strong arms.



When Peakbow came back he was impressed of how respectful where the students to him. When he arrived in to meet Steelflake he gave him an award of the best climber in the Center. Peakbow didn’t think he was worthy of such great gift but after a while Peakbow got convinced. “Wow!” yelled Peakbow super happy “but why?” asked Peakbow clueless.
“Because you climbed Enokew... no one ever climb Enokew Peakbow,”
“Well thank you so much!”
“Peakbow,” asked Steelfalake
“Yes?”
“Would you like to be part of the Elite Climbers?”
“Well of course!” shouted Peakbo

Well he learned the advanced climbing techniques and became very good. Peakbow was finally able to visit his cousin Ringbushin.
 

THE END


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